REVISING
Do
you have at least 5 paragraphs with an introduction/status quo, the problem, try/fails,
blocks or escalating events, climax, and a conclusion?
Are your events in order from beginning, middle, and end?
Do you have at least 5 sentences of dialogue?
Do you have 5 precise words from the sensory details posters?
Make sure you DID NOT use SAID with dialogue!
Do the Precise
Words folder
EDITING
Did you indent each paragraph?
Do you have effective punctuation, capitals, commas, and quotation marks used correctly?
Are all of your words spelled correctly?
Do the Stop &
Go/ Red Light-Green Light folder
Here is the rubric I will grade student's stories on:
Narrative Rubric
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1.Correct use of punctuation when forming sentences.
L.4.2
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0-2 punctuation errors.
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3-5 punctuation errors.
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6-10 punctuation errors.
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More than 10 punctuation errors.
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2. No Fragment or run on sentences
L.4.1f
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0-1 run-ons or fragment sentences
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2-3 run-ons or fragment sentences
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4-5 run-ons or fragment sentences
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More than 5 run-ons or fragment sentences
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3. Correct spelling of 4th grade words
L.4.2d
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0-3 misspelled words
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4-7 misspelled words
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8-11 misspelled words
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11 or more misspelled words
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4. Correct use of capitals at the beginning of sentences and proper nouns
L.4.2
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0-2 incorrect capital errors
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3-4 incorrect capital errors
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5-6 incorrect capital errors
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7 or more
incorrect capital errors
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5. Clear description of setting and changes of settings
W.4.3a
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Setting of story is easily identified and in transitions
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Setting of story is identified with a bit of difficulty.
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Unclear setting throughout story
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No location of events in story
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6. Clear description of main characters
W.4.3b
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Main characters described in detail.
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Main characters somewhat described.
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Vague
description of some characters.
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Vague
description of all main characters.
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7. Use of conversation and quotations
W.4.3b
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Has 3 conversations and uses quotations correctly.
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Has 2-3 conservations and has errors using quotation
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Has 1 conversations and/ or has many errors using quotation
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Didn’t have any conversations and quotations.
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8. Clear sequence of events, and order of the story
W.4.3
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Most events flow from one event to another with clear transition.
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Some events flow from one event to another with clear transition.
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A few events flow from one event to another with some transition.
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The sequence of the story is unclear and events seem out of order
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9. Clear conclusion to the story/ problem.
W.4.3e
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Conclusion has a complete “wrap up” of the events in the story.
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Conclusion has a partial “wrap up” of the events in the story.
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Story ends abruptly with little or no conclusion.
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Doesn’t include a conclusion.
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Complete use of writing process
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Uses most of the writing process
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Uses some steps.
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Doesn’t use the writing process
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